I really enjoyed your story until the stranger appeared and just touched the MC (the collar of their shirt) and the MC followed him without any resistance (following a stranger into a storage room where he could've done, god knows what, to them) triggered me, especially since I couldn't do/choose anything and just had to bear it. I couldn't continue reading after this. I sincerely wish you and your story all the best, because it does sound like an awesome story, but unfortunately I won't be able to read it, i'm sorry :/ . Nevertheless, keep going you've got talent :D
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I really enjoyed your story until the stranger appeared and just touched the MC (the collar of their shirt) and the MC followed him without any resistance (following a stranger into a storage room where he could've done, god knows what, to them) triggered me, especially since I couldn't do/choose anything and just had to bear it. I couldn't continue reading after this.
I sincerely wish you and your story all the best, because it does sound like an awesome story, but unfortunately I won't be able to read it, i'm sorry :/ . Nevertheless, keep going you've got talent :D
Goddamn tht prologue was dramatic af lol i loved it!!! Well done excited for more ♥️😇
Also the "run into death" and "restore into death" is cute when loading the game. So unique
Thank you!
I wanted to try something new with the "Run"; something that correlated with the game. I appreciate you for noticing! :)
Ooooh I love it !!
that was so cool!
intriguing opening to the story. Hyped to learn more about Grim!
Eagerly awaiting future chapters! This is so good 👍
Ohh this is interesting. Can't wait for more of this. 🙏🥰
I loved it🩷🩷🩷🩷
i love history💕
Really enjoyed this!!! Can't wait for more.
This has got me hooked now. Looking forward to the next update!
I really like it! I'll defiantly wait for this story progress.
Love it